- love
bella xoxo
_______________________________________________________
It was the first week of July and everyone was either
traveling, or getting ready to travel. Noura on the other hand had no plans for
the summer. Her parents were already abroad and she stayed in Kuwait with her
brother Fahad. She really wanted to travel, but she was busy looking and
applying for jobs. All her friends were going to travel in a few days and they
all decided to go out for brunch before each one goes in a different direction.
Noura loved her friends but they weren’t so close as they were back in high
school. They barely saw each other, but when they did, its like they never
graduated. But Noura did stay
close with one friend only, Lulu. Noura and Lulu were inseparable since Middle
School, and they stayed that way. Noura really considers Lulu as a sister, and
her family loves her and considers her as their daughter.
The girls all finished eating and were enjoying some sweets
with coffee and discussing everything when suddenly Abrar said, “Banat
mageltlekum!!”
“Sheno golay?” Noura said
“Et3arfoun 3azeez AlFlani? Ely obouh Mohammed AlFlani?” She
said
Noura quickly gave a look to Lulu who understood what she
meant exactly. Noura kind of knew who 3azeez was, but that was around 4 years
ago.
“Eeeh golay eshfeeh?” Lulu asked instead of Noura, who tried
to seem uninterested.
“Sema3t ena khe6ab!” Abrar’s eyes gleamed, as if what she
said was valuable information.
Noura gulped nervously and smiled, “eeh allah ewafga..” but
deep inside she was burning with curiosity and wonder.
“Haw laa Abrar chena sema3t ena ga3deen edawroonla?” Fatima
said
“La la ana omi galatly ena kha6eb bas ena lama al7een ma
e3lnouha!!” Abrar smiled.
That was Abrar, always interested with other people’s lives.
She always had the latest news and gossip, she was very trustworthy but she
couldn’t keep her mouth shut.
“Eeh kaifha e7na shako?” Noura said
“Matabeen et3arfen mino eb ya5th?” Abrar said
Noura shook her head, “Ma3arfa wala e9eerli w mayhmeny
el9ara7a!”
“Waay Noura maleeqa!” Abrar said teasing her friend.
Noura was the type that didn’t care for gossip and she hates
when people start gossiping.
Lulu sensed that Noura was bothered with the subject so she
immediately started talking about something else. Noura on the other hand
sipped her coffee quietly, listening to her friend’s talk but her mind wandered
off to about 4 years ago, the day she met 3azeez.
It was the year she graduated from high school, and the
summer that her niece, Jana, was born. Dhari, Noura's eldest brother, works at
the Kuwaiti Embassy in America. He’s married to Salma and they occasionally
come to Kuwait in the holidays. Mostly though, Noura, Fahad and their parents
visit Dhari each summer. That summer, Fahad had plans with his friends, they
were going to Europe and so Noura and her parents were the only ones who went
to Dhari. Noura had a great time with her family in the States and she met with
some of her friends and had a blast. But Noura had to leave three weeks earlier
than her parents because her classes were starting.
Dhari was the one who dropped off Noura at the airport. He
helped her check in and walked her to security.
“Bel salamah 7abebty, deray balech 3ala nafsech oo 6amnena
awal mato9len” Dhari kissed Noura's cheeks and hugged her. Noura was the
youngest of her siblings and both her brothers loved her very much. But she was
closer to Fahad than she was to Dhari even when the age difference between her
and Fahad was 6 years, they were very close.
“Dhari eshda3wa tara mu awal marra asafer brou7y!” Noura teased her brother
“Walla law etsafreen eldenya kelha brou7ich ba’9el a7atech
wayin matrou7een! You are my baby sister!”
“Haay haay shno baby! Ana al7een ta5arajt men thanawy so ana
mu baby!” Noura bugged her eyes.
“Laa baby w ne9!” Dhari laughed
Noura rolled her eyes and hugged her brother; it was time
for her to head to the gate. “Enshalla ebtyeoun eb December?” Noura asked
“Eeh enshalla 6ab3an!” Dhari smiled
“Ashwaa! La2ni men al7een walhana 3ala Janooya!” Noura frowned
“Afa! Bas ebtolheen 3ala benty??”
“Laa 6ab3an 7ata enta w Salma! Lat6awloon 3alayna tekfa
Dharooy!” Noura begged
“Men 3yoone,” Dhari winked and they said their goodbyes and
Noura proceeded to the gate.
She boarded the plane and got seated. The seat next to her
was empty and she felt relieved. She didn’t want to be sitting next to a
stranger for a 16-hour flight. So she put her bag on the empty seat and got her
book and Ipod and prepared them for the flight. The flight attendants were
serving complementary drinks and snacks so she got herself a diet coke and some
salted peanuts. She was seated in the business section, which wasn’t full at
all. There were only a few passengers in that section and it was nice and
quiet. 5 minutes before the gate was closed, a tall handsome man boarded the
plane and was looking for his seat.
Noura wasn’t paying any attention; she was looking for songs
on her play list when suddenly she heard a voice ask her, “Law sama7tay hathy
jan6etch?”
She looked up and was completely mesmerized by his eyes. He
had soft brown eyes that would take your breath away. Noura was completely
speechless. She opened her mouth to reply but no words were coming out. It was
like she was suddenly put on mute. He smiled at her cute embarrassed face,
which made Noura's heart melt. His smile was absolutely adorable. He had two
dimples and when he smiled, his eyes became so small.
Noura's face turned red, she wasn’t only embarrassed by the
fact that she was speechless, but also by the fact that he noticed she was
embarrassed.
“Eeh..” was the only thing that Noura could whisper.
Luckily for her, the flight attendant came to the rescue and
took her bag and placed it in the overhead stowage.
He sat next to her, and her heart started racing. She looked
around her and found so many empty seats. He could’ve changed his place and
took any other seat, but the fact that he wanted to sit next to her was making
her feel so ecstatic.
While he was getting seated she quickly studied his hand and
face to guess how old he was and if he was married or not. She found no ring on
his hand and he seemed to be in his early twenty’s.
Everyone got seated and the plane took off. She wanted to
talk to him but she didn’t want to seem as if she was bold or brash.
So she grabbed her book and started reading, and to her
luck, he started the conversation.
“Paulo Coelho ha?” he smiled and hoped that the conversation
keeps going.
She smiled back at him and nodded, “eeh he’s one of my
favorite authors.”
“7ata ana,” He smiled and made eye contact. He noticed that
her face turns red every time their eyes meet. He stared at her eyes. She had
beautiful eyes and beautiful facial features. Her face was heart shaped with
high cheekbones, a narrow chin and a small nose. She had a gorgeous smile with
white straight teeth. Her hair was the perfect shade of brown that complemented
her olive toned skin.
She held out her book, “tara etha tabe tegraha, I’m almost
done with it bugali two chapters.”
“Laa mashkoora gareha oo khale9,” he smiled again, “ma3ach
3azeez AlFlani,” He put his hand out to shake hers.
Her heart skipped a beat, “Noura AlFlani,” she shook his
hand and smiled back.
“Welne3im!” He said
“Yen3am eb7alek, mashkoor..” She looked away shyly.
3azeez wanted to know everything there was about Noura. He
was so interested in her the moment he saw her.
He didn’t know whether it was attraction or just excitement,
he felt something towards her, and he wasn't quite sure if she felt the same way.
They kept talking throughout the whole flight, she told him
that she just graduated from high school and he told her that he was studying in
the States and that he was going back home for a few months and going back for
the spring semester.
It turns out he was 3 years older than her and that she was
still so young for any kind of relationship.
Noura wasn’t even the type of person that would be in a
relationship, although her family wasn’t conservative at all, Noura never
really had anytime for relationships.
3azeez on the other hand came from a very liberal family,
yet he was a bit conservative.
Noura fell asleep for the last few hours of the trip and
3azeez watched a movie.
When they landed to Kuwait, Noura was wondering whether
they’d stay as friends but she wasn’t going to suggest anything. 3azeez was
also wondering if he should stay in touch with Noura but he didn’t say anything
because he was waiting for Noura to bring the subject up, but sadly she didn’t
so neither one of them got any contact information.
“El7emdalla 3alsalamah,” 3azeez said as they got out of
their seats and grabbed their bags.
“Allah esalmek,” Noura smiled
Then they fell in awkward silence, so 3azeez quickly said,
“allah ewafgech oo sheday 7alech belderasa!” and he put out his hand to shake
hers for one last time.
“Mashkoor, o ent ba3ad allah ewafgik enshalla..” She shook
his hand and stared at his eyes. A part of her wanted to stay in that moment
forever, she wanted to fly again and just keep talking to him, but that wasn’t
happening. They said their goodbyes and left the plane and for four years, she
never heard from him nor saw him again. Although she kept hoping for a miracle
to happen and she’d see him by coincidence, but that miracle never came.
No one knew about what happened between her and 3azeez
except Lulu. So when Abrar brought his name up, Lulu knew exactly how Noura felt.
“Nouroo,” Lulu said to Noura as they were driving back home.
“Hallaa?” Noura said with a dazed look.
“Eshfeech em5ansa?” Lulu asked
“Laa mafeny shay..” Noura said
“3alay hal kalam Nouroo?”
Noura sighed, “Lulu abe 3azeez..”
Lulu rolled her eyes, “Nwaira cham marra ba3eed elkalam
3alaich? 9adgeeni etha lekum ne9eeb 7ag ba3ath, beyeech!”
“Eeh enzain bas ya3ne lama solafna kan ako sh3our ghareb
bayne w bayna! Ya3ne methl attraction!” Noura confessed
“7abebty that was four years ago!! Mara7 ag9 3alaich, bas
tara 3ade elwalad nesach!!” Lulu said
“Waay yakalba latgoleen chthy!” Noura frowned
“La 7abebty bagool! La2na mu zain lech ench em3alga nafsech
arba3 esneen ebwa7ed yemkn asasan maya’9kerich!” Lulu said
“Bas ana 7abaita walla! W met2akda ena ohwa 7abny!” Noura said
Lulu sighed, she was tired of having this conversation for
the past four years.
“Enzain etha kalamteeh, eshbetgolenlah?” Lulu asked, she was
finally willing to help out her friend.
“Madri, bas abe aklma.. Etha kalam Abrar 9j, abe aklma
before its too late” Noura whispered, she waited for four years and she couldn’t
wait any longer.
“Khalas ayeblich raqam elyoum..” Lulu said
“Eshloun???? W entay rathya?” Noura asked
Lulu nodded, “mani meqtan3a wayed bel fekra, bas mayendara
she9eer.”
“Enzain men wayen betyebeen elraqam?”
“Faris.” Lulu replied.
To be continued...
ONE WORD.
ReplyDeleteAMAZING!!!
i'm so hooked , i cannot wait to read it all.
just please dont kill anyone.
youre so talented , please post the next chapter soon. pleaaaaaseee!!!!
Thank you so much ;**
Delete& no I'm not gonna kill anyone this time:p
-bella xoxo
I'm loving the story can't wait for the rest!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you are !
Delete-bella xoxo
lovee it! can't wait for the next posy :D <3
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like it!
DeleteI'm gonna post every week inshalla!
-bella xoxo
A wonderful start, very interesting. I read your other story and I really liked it I'm personally not a fan of mushy/cheesy kinds of love and I certainly do not like a cliche. Your previous story was anything BUT a cliche I love when the writer just takes you off guard and adds that realistic sense into the stories where the ending is not so perfect. Anyways, I can't wait to see how this story turns out to be.
ReplyDeleteLots of love x
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Delete& yes, in my previous story the whole message behind it was that not everything in life is a fairytale no matter how good it looks and how good it sounds, & that we shouldn't take anything for granted.
I'm really glad you liked my story and I hope you like this one as well
love,
-bella xoxo
Love it ♥ mshallah ur talnted ;) your way of writing t5lyna ntshwa8 nfs Alold story ♥ 7bait al begning waiting for more ♥ Post soon ;*
ReplyDeleteThank you 7abebty :*
DeleteI just posted a new part! enjooy<3
-bella xoxo
I loved the story I think it's going to be an intresting journey I'm so excited! I just want to tell you a little mistake that's maybe gonna confuse your readers when she met 3aziz she told him that she graduated from uni wasn't that supposed to be high school? Anyways much love for you xx
ReplyDelete